What is your body? It's just avatar.
It can be looking nice and fashion.
It can be beautiful like fallen star
And easy can become obsession.
Some girls want to improve their breasts.
Their lips are full of silicone.
It is erotic long invests.
And every is like perfect drone.
But everything inside is still the same.
She is like spider weaving sticky web.
No one can stop her close to the aim.
She'll overtake it step by step.
But it's again just nothing good.
Her victim is another body.
She can't to taste the soul's mood.
Black hole. That's it what her embody.
Appreciate the deepth of heart and mind.
Feel cosmos all around in every creature.
There is a Love. You have to try to find.
Just come and look. It's winning feature.
What is your body? It s just avatar
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There are It may haps a trivial thing, the people spelling a poetry in other languages ecxept by their native Russian in a big Cities. But for those [as i.g. me]who dwells constantly in sub[b]erbials-territories without even a right or a chance sometimes for even a shortest trip- out of their Saint exile spot///
In a word! It IS as like some marvelous a gulp of cleanest breathing....
THEREFORE i repeate!
As well as in a case with a beauty-gall Mirel,-i too much value and appreciate anyONE EACH though of a simply on literature English a poet who does the same in instant Russsian as well!!!!
P.S.
iT IS A ALSO A GOOD CHANCE FOR ME TO AKNOWLEGE AND YOUR NANE FOR MINE MODEST COOLLECTION ON {ECEPT BY RUSSIAN SPELLING POETS}FOR AN EXPERIANCE EXCHANGE!!!
Герман Калеев 12.09.2016 11:48 • Заявить о нарушении
In a word! It IS as like some marvelous a gulp of cleanest breathing....
THEREFORE i repeate!
As well as in a case with a beauty-gall Mirel,-i too much value and appreciate anyONE EACH though of a simply on literature English a poet who does the same in instant Russsian as well!!!!
P.S.
iT IS A ALSO A GOOD CHANCE FOR ME TO AKNOWLEGE AND YOUR NANE FOR MINE MODEST COOLLECTION ON {ECEPT BY RUSSIAN SPELLING POETS}FOR AN EXPERIANCE EXCHANGE!!!
Герман Калеев 12.09.2016 11:48 • Заявить о нарушении
Could you explain more shortly and clearly? )
Антон Фролов Антуан 12.09.2016 11:56 Заявить о нарушении
Антон Фролов Антуан 12.09.2016 11:56 Заявить о нарушении
To spell in the poems not in vain.
That's all the things i could explain!))
Писать стихи, не только,-и поэмы!!
Талант нашёл, а как не только в стол?
Такая вот диллема!!!)))[перевод твоего/моего же д выше с английского на русский]
Герман Калеев 12.09.2016 13:40 Заявить о нарушении
That's all the things i could explain!))
Писать стихи, не только,-и поэмы!!
Талант нашёл, а как не только в стол?
Такая вот диллема!!!)))[перевод твоего/моего же д выше с английского на русский]
Герман Калеев 12.09.2016 13:40 Заявить о нарушении
what do you want to do with all this things? ))
Do you want print your own book? )
Антон Фролов Антуан 12.09.2016 16:03 Заявить о нарушении
Do you want print your own book? )
Антон Фролов Антуан 12.09.2016 16:03 Заявить о нарушении
an ultimate' a teacher in
Subberbian forlon private scool!!
T'would be far better
Than just
hanning by a loop, or even a mortal last your hook!!)))
Герман Калеев 12.09.2016 16:44 Заявить о нарушении
Subberbian forlon private scool!!
T'would be far better
Than just
hanning by a loop, or even a mortal last your hook!!)))
Герман Калеев 12.09.2016 16:44 Заявить о нарушении
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