The mystic violin
Divine melody, your trace
sways, fills the dreamy summer air.
The bow, the fingers join a race
old feelings die; the soul’s free, bare.
Are feelings gone? have they been singed?
Let me vibrate, ignite my lightning…
Like “E” string trying to pierce the bridge.
Shake the complacent “me”, inviting
“awake and Feel, sing, be in tune
with Nature’s greatest orchestrator”
Song – green and primal, mystic rune…
Are we your violins, Creator?
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Fred 31.07.2002 16:24 Заявить о нарушении
I looked at a couple of your lyrics, I think they could use some improvement in grammar, but they show great feeling :o)
If you like, e-mail me your lyrics to Athena__73@SoftHome.net and when I have some free time, I could point out where the problems are.
Glad to see another musician!
Best of luck to you :o)
Athena
Athena 22.09.2002 09:30 Заявить о нарушении
Fred 23.09.2002 16:29 Заявить о нарушении