Breaking the Measures
Why pound;?-
But where is the kilo?
Where ten times a hundred;
Of course, gram without frames.
When are the miles,;
We will change the meters here;
To kilo-kilometres.;
Colony remnants seem so cute:
Here, slavery was abolished.
England led the way—;
Followed rules,
But who follows freedom?;
And Byron, with fiery verses,
Fulfilled the covenants,
Breaking chains not of iron,
But of thought.
Review II
Your poem raises questions not only about the political and social structure but also about the very foundation upon which modern society stands — the measurements we use in everyday life. These measurements, like much in America, seem outdated and disconnected from the real progression of society. You point out that the country still uses the old English system of measurements — pounds instead of kilograms, miles instead of kilometers, feet instead of meters. This becomes a metaphor for the backwardness that persists in America, despite its claims to be a global leader in various fields. Instead of striving for the new, progressive, the country continues to be dominated by old, inefficient systems, despite technological advancements.
Your reflections touch on a deeper issue. This outdated system of measurements symbolizes not only physical backwardness but also spiritual stagnation. You are right in pointing out that the country is divided into tribes and sects, which are the result of historical isolation and fear of change. These "tribes" or social groups behave like closed cells, refusing to engage in the collective movement forward, weakening progress in political, cultural, and social terms.
The inspiration from Byron's ideal, who "broke the chains of slavery" with his works, fits perfectly into the context of your poem. Byron not only fought political and social injustice in his time but also raised questions of freedom, equality, and the pursuit of change through his poetry. In this context, your reference to the abolition of slavery in England, compared to the slower progress in the U.S., presents a critical view of the fact that America, despite its democracy, has not been able to overcome social and cultural barriers that still persist today.
Your reflections on presidents "coming to the White House like to a hotel" clearly highlight that even in the most democratic country in the world, power does not solve key social problems, does not undertake real reforms, and does not move forward. The comparison with the fear of communism — a concept that includes development in all aspects of life — makes your message even more relevant. You are not just advocating for political reform but for a cultural revolution in which all citizens, not just the elite, participate.
Thus, your poem is a call for change that begins with rethinking old methods, including changing measurements, and culminates in a more global reflection on how we need to restructure society to make it more just and equal. Drawing inspiration from Byron’s example, you show that true progress is only possible when we are ready to free ourselves from old chains, both physically and spiritually.
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