you make me feel the things i never knew existed
and therefore give the virtuous delight
i must admit – i thought my fate was twisted
though you stepped up – no fear, no harm, no spite
the midday gloom gives way to evening splendor
my soul's been captured by a blissful sprite
i can't do anything against him but surrender
the voice within proclaims: "it's not a fright"
it's meant to be, i'm sure, no use assuming
yet still i'm anxious, still somewhat uptight
as if I were a bud that could once bloom in
into a flower – shine for me, shine bright
as one wise person said (let me recite)
i carry your heart with me (i carry it in my heart)
i carry your heart with me
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your lines feel so real and honest
a mix of warmth and doubt that sticks
feels like you’re writing from the heart
you’ve captured the magic of love
Андрей Ядвинский 29.11.2024 07:58 • Заявить о нарушении
a mix of warmth and doubt that sticks
feels like you’re writing from the heart
you’ve captured the magic of love
Андрей Ядвинский 29.11.2024 07:58 • Заявить о нарушении
thanks for the kind words!
i hope i have captured that magic, not in a vulgar way though - just a gentle grasp
Кузнецов Вова 29.11.2024 10:39 Заявить о нарушении
i hope i have captured that magic, not in a vulgar way though - just a gentle grasp
Кузнецов Вова 29.11.2024 10:39 Заявить о нарушении
you absolutely did
it’s that gentle grasp that makes it so special
subtle, heartfelt, and full of meaning – beautifully done
Андрей Ядвинский 29.11.2024 21:31 Заявить о нарушении
it’s that gentle grasp that makes it so special
subtle, heartfelt, and full of meaning – beautifully done
Андрей Ядвинский 29.11.2024 21:31 Заявить о нарушении