A whitish haze is stamped into the air
From pale to bright reflections in the sky,
Then dark reminisces fall down on to the square,
Its creepy outlines can hardly be identified
A heavy slumber plunges us into a twinkling abyss
Where ones are travellers, another ones are lost
A narrow passage can be found out with an ease
The sheerer is the right solution, the higher is it’s cost
There are the dreamers of the that dreary circle
High soaring free above the life’s unfolding plot,
Removing dust and jumping over never ending hurcles
Awaken after longsome anesthesia, inspired by a clear thought
Twinkling abyss
© Copyright: Анастасия Пристин, 2024
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It's interesting and deep, makes you think about life and the choices we make.
You express your thoughts
really well in English, not all native speakers can do that (but that's just between us, shh) ;)
Александр Штейнберг 19.11.2024 18:32 • Заявить о нарушении
You express your thoughts
really well in English, not all native speakers can do that (but that's just between us, shh) ;)
Александр Штейнберг 19.11.2024 18:32 • Заявить о нарушении
I’m really flattered ☺ Thanks a lot, Sasha🤗🫶
Nice to hear from you. Let me check what’s new there on your page 🤪 I still crave a book about trials&tribulations, passion and sadness (not only the summertime one 😂) dedicated to the lifelong story “A.S + M”🥹
Believe it or not :recently I updated a playlist in my car. Added all my favourite songs of Pet Shop Boys and now every time I listen to them, somehow I always recall your poems.
Oh and by the way shame on me but recently I learned about the British band the Adventures of Stevie V ( saw couple of stories with their music in Insta) love their “Dirty cash” and Jealousy both remixed. I sure you know them
Анастасия Пристин 20.11.2024 22:38 Заявить о нарушении
Nice to hear from you. Let me check what’s new there on your page 🤪 I still crave a book about trials&tribulations, passion and sadness (not only the summertime one 😂) dedicated to the lifelong story “A.S + M”🥹
Believe it or not :recently I updated a playlist in my car. Added all my favourite songs of Pet Shop Boys and now every time I listen to them, somehow I always recall your poems.
Oh and by the way shame on me but recently I learned about the British band the Adventures of Stevie V ( saw couple of stories with their music in Insta) love their “Dirty cash” and Jealousy both remixed. I sure you know them
Анастасия Пристин 20.11.2024 22:38 Заявить о нарушении
Oh, a book... I don't know..) There's not enough for a whole book. Actually, I even deleted some stuff here and censored a bit.
Aw, that's sweet. Yeah, I know them, of course, I'm such a dinosaur.))) I don't even have Instagram..) By the way, I’ve recently been talking to some Gen Z people, and there’s so much slang I don’t know anymore, oh my god, it’s insane…))
Александр Штейнберг 21.11.2024 02:20 Заявить о нарушении
Aw, that's sweet. Yeah, I know them, of course, I'm such a dinosaur.))) I don't even have Instagram..) By the way, I’ve recently been talking to some Gen Z people, and there’s so much slang I don’t know anymore, oh my god, it’s insane…))
Александр Штейнберг 21.11.2024 02:20 Заявить о нарушении
Dinosaur is over 60, Sasha ))) you are still young 😏
Insta is for us girls (for showing off 🤪) men don’t really need it imho. They prove stuff in deeds and in the real world.
Gen Z gosh yeah 🤪 so funny. In our mother language these are mainly anglicisms, so you can always guess I guess 😂
Анастасия Пристин 23.11.2024 23:07 Заявить о нарушении
Insta is for us girls (for showing off 🤪) men don’t really need it imho. They prove stuff in deeds and in the real world.
Gen Z gosh yeah 🤪 so funny. In our mother language these are mainly anglicisms, so you can always guess I guess 😂
Анастасия Пристин 23.11.2024 23:07 Заявить о нарушении
Oh, over 60! Alright, noted 😅
I actually know quite a few guys who use Instagram for similar reasons 🤪 I’m pretty sure I’ve appeared in some of their photos too, but let’s not go there 🤣
And yeah, about anglicisms — you’re right, but sometimes it’s just something totally random, like skibidi 😝
Александр Штейнберг 23.11.2024 23:38 Заявить о нарушении
I actually know quite a few guys who use Instagram for similar reasons 🤪 I’m pretty sure I’ve appeared in some of their photos too, but let’s not go there 🤣
And yeah, about anglicisms — you’re right, but sometimes it’s just something totally random, like skibidi 😝
Александр Штейнберг 23.11.2024 23:38 Заявить о нарушении
Guys using insta to show off … wow 😂😂😂
No we’ll not go there for sure, you don’t need to see me bragging 🤣
Oh, skibidi 🫨 impossible to guess, true, but thanks now I know what is 🤪
Анастасия Пристин 24.11.2024 19:43 Заявить о нарушении
No we’ll not go there for sure, you don’t need to see me bragging 🤣
Oh, skibidi 🫨 impossible to guess, true, but thanks now I know what is 🤪
Анастасия Пристин 24.11.2024 19:43 Заявить о нарушении
You know, they’re those kinds of guys… they’re not like most guys 🤪😅
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