I open my eyes in the morning
It gets me,
I sit in my car in the noon
It suppresses me,
I walk in parks in the evening
It reflects in me,
No place to escape from it -
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I used to be hungry for it -
Reserve for the future,
I learned long & hard every bit
For a cool outcome,
I chose well the right one
To serve me as a goodie,
But something is wrong nowadays-
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I love clear sounds and wisdom
To fill me,
But that icky noise all around
It beats me,
Why does my head have to filter
To save me
From so much of a loathsome and rank -
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Hi, Nastya :)
Yes, and when I read this, I had no doubt – it’s definitely a song, as others have noted. While I completely agree with the Radiohead comparison, the tracks that came to mind for me were a bit more rough. I also thought of Dylan and late Cohen. But to be frank, there’s no need to compare – it’s a brilliant, deep, and original poem-song 😎 Love it!
Алекс Штейнберг 19.10.2024 21:47 • Заявить о нарушении
Yes, and when I read this, I had no doubt – it’s definitely a song, as others have noted. While I completely agree with the Radiohead comparison, the tracks that came to mind for me were a bit more rough. I also thought of Dylan and late Cohen. But to be frank, there’s no need to compare – it’s a brilliant, deep, and original poem-song 😎 Love it!
Алекс Штейнберг 19.10.2024 21:47 • Заявить о нарушении
Dear Sasha, thanks a lot for your kind review 🙏🤗
This was a stream of consciousness when I desperately needed silence and after I found out there was rhyme 😁
Merci once again ☺🫶🙏
Анастасия Пристин 20.10.2024 19:30 Заявить о нарушении
This was a stream of consciousness when I desperately needed silence and after I found out there was rhyme 😁
Merci once again ☺🫶🙏
Анастасия Пристин 20.10.2024 19:30 Заявить о нарушении
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