Summer day

Анастасия Пристин
“Excuse me, may I disagree ?”-
She asked the sky and sighed,
The burning sun behind the trees 
Spilt orange heat on meadow’s wide

All colours were so dazzling bright,
She wore a gown of linen,
The melting moment till the night
To get replies, to be forgiven

That day she stood without stirring 
In awe of a beautiful halo,
The nature’s voice - alluring whirring
Performed it’s peaceful adagio

In vibrabt waves and mesmerizing sounds
She made no move and screwed her eyes
There was no fear, neither bounds
She asked the sky for a new sunrise


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Anastasia, I’m really impressed. The flow is so musical, with beautiful imagery and a smooth rhythm... The style feels a lot like Romantic poets such as Wordsworth or Keats.
If we're keeping it short, it's just wow!

Алекс Штейнберг   26.09.2024 00:54   •   Заявить о нарушении
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Alex, hi. Thanks:)I really appreciate you taking the time to express that.
Surely enough I’m way too far from such geniuses as Wordsworth & Co, but I definitely like this comparison, it makes me smile и, чего уж греха таить, взбодрило мое эго )))

Анастасия Пристин   26.09.2024 11:39   Заявить о нарушении
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