angels dance at my shoulder

i'm my life's owner,
angels dance at my shoulder
if my life over —
i will follow their order

all my steps fating
i don't know, what i'm waiting
just want to glancing
how my angels will dancing

don't want resisting
i'm don't speaking, just listening
deserve my existing
i watch angels persisting

i feel life's savor
i well know what is matter
captain and sailor
i just want angel's favor

no saint and no soldier
at my fate one beholder
i'm my life's owner,
angels dance at my shoulder

Ver.2 for all, who love right English (my editor, thank you)

I am the master of my fate,
Angels by my side, never late.
If my life should come to an end,
I will follow their guidance, they will send.

Every step I take is preordained,
Not sure what I am waiting to gain.
Just watching, with a hopeful glance,
As my angels twirl in a heavenly dance.

No need for me to resist,
I just listen, my fate persist.
I am worthy of this existence,
Watching my angels with persistence.

Life's sweet flavors I savor,
Knowing only what truly matters.
I am both the captain and sailor,
Seeking only the angels' favor.

No saints or soldiers in sight,
Only one to behold my plight.
I am in control, the owner of my life,
With angels by my side, removing all strife.