The path to yourself

Wiser than the lessons of life
In the mind, striving for a dream
The truths of the inner prophets shine
When our paths lie straight within

All frontiers are like Rubicons of weekdays
Gliding through them, meeting with the light,
Catching a spark and drawing from the wonder sources,
Asking questions and getting replies

Endless is the event horizon;
A masterpiece is written every day
Where happiness of all new meetings, victories, kaleidoscope of revelations’s rising
And building tirelessly the steps of a new life’s way.


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Your philosophical reflection feels whole, and I really relate to your thinking. I also want to mention that your English is at a really high level :)

Алекс Штейнберг   28.09.2024 20:40     Заявить о нарушении
Alex,hi. Whazzz up ))
I remember during my college years in England and at the University at home they used to tell me - if someone praises your English, it means it's not very good :)) nevertheless, I am flattered to hear a compliment from a highly intellectual friend of my favorite authors. You are like a ray of light in the kingdom of darkness))) oh wait, I guess you are too spoilt by compliments, so Id better just narrow my reaction to the most sincere appreciation of your reviews.
Спасибо за внимание к моим стишкам :)

Анастасия Пристин   28.09.2024 21:37   Заявить о нарушении
Hey, Nastya,

now that you’ve mentioned you studied in England, you absolutely have (!!) to tell me where exactly, haha…)
Highly intellectual? That’s super nice of you, but who am I to disagree, right?)
And no, I’m definitely not spoiled by compliments, and honestly, I think you can never have too many. Especially for those of us who grew up in the Soviet era, like me..)
Thanks for the kind words and the sweet reply :)

With warmth, your ray of light (but you can call me Sasha ;)

Алекс Штейнберг   28.09.2024 22:27   Заявить о нарушении
Hey hey, Sasha! :)

1. It was the Buckinghamshire Chilterns University College
2. Highly intellectual 10000%, intelligent, ultra-
smart, witty, sarcastic, sound and so on :))sincerely from my ego to yours :) от души и ни капли лести

Анастасия Пристин   28.09.2024 23:08   Заявить о нарушении
Oh, Nastya, I’m really impressed! This is such a serious school.
Honestly, it’s been a while since anyone flattered my ego like this, haha. I guess I’ll just have to trust you on that..) Sending you tons of thanks and appreciation :))

I saw you read almost all my poems, so I’m off to write some new ones!))

Алекс Штейнберг   28.09.2024 23:37   Заявить о нарушении
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