Black heart

                ***at this poetry a Lewis Carroll quote are used

to have black heart is our big gift
the life have weight, what we can't lift
we can try best, but who will care?
black heart will help live in nightmare

to be heartless, who are so wise
ask me how i am? i lies: "nice"
don't worry too much, it's not bad
if we are here, we all are sad

to have black heart is our protection
don't gaze too much at your reflectin
"I'm mad. You're mad". Don't worry, dear
"or you and me wouldn't have come here"

ver.2 in correct English (thank to my lovely editor)

To bear a heart so dark, a gift so grand,
Life's burden heavy, we can't understand.
We strive our best, but who will truly care?
In darkness dwells, our hearts in nightmare's lair.

To be devoid of heart, a wisdom rare,
Ask of my well-being? I falsely declare: "fair".
Fret not too much, it's not all that bad,
For in this place, we're all a little sad.

To harbor hearts of black, our shield, our guide,
Avoid the mirror's gaze, where shadows hide.
"I'm mad. You're mad." Fear not, my dear,
For had we not been, we wouldn't be here.


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И снова здравствуйте)) Хотел бы взять ver.2 вашего творения для ещё одного своего музыкального произведения, предварительно адаптировав его под музыку (не много изменив, т.е. добавив и убрав несколько слов). Надеюсь вы не против, а если против, прошу сообщить мне об этом - dialos@inbox.ru

Денис Иванович   12.03.2024 14:15     Заявить о нарушении
можете использовать по своему усмотрению.
все мои тексты для того и предназначены.

Легкая Ложь   29.06.2024 00:19   Заявить о нарушении