Манекены. Машины. Бульвар. Запоздалый трамвай.
Стал спокойным и странно прекрасным мой маленький мир.
С наслажденьем тобой я дышу, как грозой дышит май,
и безмерно люблю, как продрогшие земли - Сибирь.
Наша встреча - шарада для времени, тайный догмат,
как же точно сложились секунды, минуты, года.
Помнишь, как мы с тобой в первый раз провожали закат
и как после с друзьями снимали с берёзы кота.
Как однажды проспали, спешили, смеясь и журя
тёмно-синие шторы, что съели бесчестно рассвет.
Сколько раз мы пылали, как алая в небе заря,
как сказала я "да", хотя ты думал, что скажу "нет".
Пусть декабрь в бесснежии холоден и явно пуст,
пусть заснежен чрезмерно иль слякотный - мне наплевать,
я тебя потерять больше собственной жизни боюсь.
Будет всё хорошо.
“Остаёмся с тобой зимовать»*.
*отсылка к песне "Остаемся зимовать" российской рок-группы "Сплин"
M.Neshina
2022
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