With our dreams by Inna Mashenko - derivative

The way we play
With our dreams,
The way we listen to the crows,
The way we dance under the dim
And distant light,
So fresh yet old,

The way we touch all our vessels,
The way we sing all our hymns,
We're still together in a moment
That keeps us strong, away from fears.

The way we read the songs of nature,
The way we cross the field of dreams,
Life is a book so comprehensive
Which sometimes caters to our needs.

* Thank you so much for this piece of writing - wild and harmonious.

This is my poetic review based on the impression of your poem and some works of Hermann Hesse.

*This is a derivative work based on a poem by Inna Mashenko  - http://stihi.ru/2022/02/17/4200

- a review and a post-reading fictional work (a derivative based on the original work and some classics it might be associated with)

*Personally, I see literary (Hermann Hesse), artistic (medieval and Renaissance) and philosophic (sufism, the Avesta philosophy and calendar) associations with this work. I ma grateful to the author for sharing it online.