Он Она

Он был скромный поэт и, как Андерсен, вечный романтик.
Как его персонаж, он вздыхал и терял часто голову:
«Эх, гореть тебе снова в огне, оловянный солдатик -
С балеринкой сплетаясь, расплавишься в капельку олова…»

А она всё ждала своего сокровенного принца
И писала ему откровенные письма строфою.
Но мелькали мгновенья, событья, безликие лица,
Унося вдаль на крыльях мечты балеринку с любовью…


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Так романтично написано, милый мой мальчик, ЛИТЕРАТУРНЫЙ ГЕРОЙ!
СТОЛЬКО ИЗЯЩЕСТВА, ВОСТОРГА, СКАЗОЧНОСТИ!!
Где, вновь оживает та КАПЕЛЬКА ОЛОВА в сердце...
"...на крыльях мечты... с любовью"!!!

"I feel so unsure
As I take your hand
And lead you to the dance floor.
As the music dies,
Something in your eyes
Calls to mind a silver screen
And all its sad good-byes.

I'm never gonna dance again.
Guilty feet have got no rhythm.
Though it's easy to pretend,
I know you're not a fool.

Should've known better than to cheat a friend,
And waste the chance that I'd been given.
So I'm never gonna dance again,
The way I danced with you.

Time can never mend,
The careless whispers of a good friend.
To the heart and mind,
ignorance is kind
There's no comfort in the truth,
Pain is all you'll find.

I'm never gonna dance again,
Guilty feet have got no rhythm.
Though it's easy to pretend,
I know you're not a fool.

Should've known better than to cheat a friend,
And waste the chance that I'd been given.
So I'm never gonna dance again,
The way I danced with you.

Never without your love...

Tonight the music seems so loud
I wish that we could lose this crowd
Maybe it's better this way
We'd hurt each other
With the things we’d want to say.

We could have been so good together,
We could have lived this dance forever...
But now, who's gonna dance with me?
Please stay.

I'm never gonna dance again,
Guilty feet have got no rhythm.
Though it's easy to pretend,
I know you're not a fool.

Should've known better than to cheat a friend,
And waste the chance that I'd been given.
So I'm never gonna dance again,
The way I danced with you.

Now that you're gone...
Now that you're gone...
Now that you're gone...
Was what I did so wrong? (so wrong)
That you had to leave me alone"?

Careless whisper George Michael

Надежда Зернова   19.03.2021 14:51     Заявить о нарушении
Oh, Nadezhda, how nice it is to read the lines of your fabulous, enthusiastic
and warm review!! And" Careless Whisper "by George Michael enhances the
spiritual depth of your words!!! The
theme of "SHE and HE" is multifaceted, multifaceted and endless. This is the dialectic of Life, the meaning of which is combined in various plots and variants of two principles - Female (YIN) and Male (YANG). In principle, most works of literature, music, and art consider and endlessly interpret this combination - SHE and HE.
I think that I will return to this topic more than once.

Спасибо, уважаемая Надежда, за столь высокую оценку стихотворения и душевный музыкально-лиричный отзыв с «Беспечным шёпотом» Джорджа Майкла!!!

С благодарностью и теплом тронутой души, Валерий.

Валерий Старостин   20.03.2021 00:06   Заявить о нарушении

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