Вдохновение здесь:
http://stihi.ru/2021/02/15/8147
А ЛЕВ жмурился в неге и думал о том,
Как нежна и заботлива ЛЬВИЦА,
Как прекрасно быть в мире любимым ЦАРЁМ
Со своею любимой ЦАРИЦЕЙ!
Станс А ЛЕВ жмурился...
© Copyright: Валерий Старостин, 2021
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WHAT DOES NOT HAPPEN IN NATURE when winter meets spring, dear VALERY!
"You'll wake up at dawn,
We will meet you together
Dawn's birthday
How beautiful this world is, look!
How beautiful this world is!
You can't help but notice:
Nightingales live in the world
Simple rock doves perched
How beautiful this world is, look!
How beautiful this world is!
You took a look and minutes
Stopped as if
Take them like dewdrops
How beautiful this world is, look!
How beautiful this world is!"
So Yuri Antonov felt these universal vibrations, building a poem, and David TUKHMANOV put the text on a bright melody. And so the hymn of LOVE was born!
How beautiful is this world, arranged by the ALMIGHTY: in HARMONY and LOVE!!
And YOU managed to catch the mood of the contest work-a miniature, capturing the elegant touches of the stanza!
Thank you for the wonderful lines OF YOUR POETRY, dear VALERY-so elegantly intertwined this windy FEBRUARY!
Thank you for your co-creation, harmony, and co-authorship!
Sincerely, with a serene smile. Hoffnung
Надежда Зернова 16.02.2021 01:25 • Заявить о нарушении
"You'll wake up at dawn,
We will meet you together
Dawn's birthday
How beautiful this world is, look!
How beautiful this world is!
You can't help but notice:
Nightingales live in the world
Simple rock doves perched
How beautiful this world is, look!
How beautiful this world is!
You took a look and minutes
Stopped as if
Take them like dewdrops
How beautiful this world is, look!
How beautiful this world is!"
So Yuri Antonov felt these universal vibrations, building a poem, and David TUKHMANOV put the text on a bright melody. And so the hymn of LOVE was born!
How beautiful is this world, arranged by the ALMIGHTY: in HARMONY and LOVE!!
And YOU managed to catch the mood of the contest work-a miniature, capturing the elegant touches of the stanza!
Thank you for the wonderful lines OF YOUR POETRY, dear VALERY-so elegantly intertwined this windy FEBRUARY!
Thank you for your co-creation, harmony, and co-authorship!
Sincerely, with a serene smile. Hoffnung
Надежда Зернова 16.02.2021 01:25 • Заявить о нарушении
I am very glad, dear Nadezhda, to be in tune, to co-create and to participate in your magnificent and original competition work!! Of course, the world is beautiful not only for the King of animals, but also for the King of Nature! You need to be able to see this harmonious beauty
and bring it to the reader at the tip of your pen...!
Thank you for your co-creation and optimistic feedback!!
With an answering smile and the warmth of the grateful soul of the co-author, Valery.
Валерий Старостин 16.02.2021 23:09 Заявить о нарушении
and bring it to the reader at the tip of your pen...!
Thank you for your co-creation and optimistic feedback!!
With an answering smile and the warmth of the grateful soul of the co-author, Valery.
Валерий Старостин 16.02.2021 23:09 Заявить о нарушении