Зима разгоралась, но стало неважно,
О чём там метель завывает протяжно.
Двоим надоел их шалашик любовный,
Их мучали близость и холод духовный.
Морозное небо над хрупким приютом
Осыпалось снегом, совсем неуютным,
Смотрело звездой с чистым взором младенца,
От сини которого некуда деться.
Костёр отпылал, только искры остались.
Они словно звёзды вокруг рассыпАлись.
Их двое бросали с упорством вандальным,
В стремлении ближнего смешивать с дальним.
Зима разгоралась…
Зима разгоралась
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"Behind you without closing the door
I have been living for many years,
And since then the countdown of my accidental losses
The stopped person is waiting for someone.
Again a blizzard,
and the past is being torn apart in the dark,
Another blizzard,
Two eternities converged
In one short day,
A short day...
You don't know me, I'm sorry,
On the threshold of long do not languish,
After all, now our repeated love has
The whole life will become a statute of limitations."
Jahan's Redzepova Pollyeva -
The author of these soulful lines stihotvoreniya, threw their "logs" in the fire of WINTER... Flaring up, they warmed the SOULS OF MANY!
HAVING thawed out - the hearts were drawn to the warmth, no matter what happened in the past...
Konstantin Meladze-hurried to the light of the winter campfire, collecting the sparks of those lines - put them to music!
The Snow Maiden with WINTER liked this elegant sadness, in which these lines sounded like sparks of hope.
"Snowstorm again" performed by Alla Pugacheva and Kristina Orbakakite-which year, the country is immersed in a magical trance of winter, New Year's Eve.
"WINTER WAS BREAKING OUT" and nothing could stop her in her triumph... even those two... in the hut. Sincerely, HOFFNUNG
Надежда Зернова 04.02.2021 22:25 • Заявить о нарушении
I have been living for many years,
And since then the countdown of my accidental losses
The stopped person is waiting for someone.
Again a blizzard,
and the past is being torn apart in the dark,
Another blizzard,
Two eternities converged
In one short day,
A short day...
You don't know me, I'm sorry,
On the threshold of long do not languish,
After all, now our repeated love has
The whole life will become a statute of limitations."
Jahan's Redzepova Pollyeva -
The author of these soulful lines stihotvoreniya, threw their "logs" in the fire of WINTER... Flaring up, they warmed the SOULS OF MANY!
HAVING thawed out - the hearts were drawn to the warmth, no matter what happened in the past...
Konstantin Meladze-hurried to the light of the winter campfire, collecting the sparks of those lines - put them to music!
The Snow Maiden with WINTER liked this elegant sadness, in which these lines sounded like sparks of hope.
"Snowstorm again" performed by Alla Pugacheva and Kristina Orbakakite-which year, the country is immersed in a magical trance of winter, New Year's Eve.
"WINTER WAS BREAKING OUT" and nothing could stop her in her triumph... even those two... in the hut. Sincerely, HOFFNUNG
Надежда Зернова 04.02.2021 22:25 • Заявить о нарушении
These lines and the song did not leave me indifferent, and I responded with the poem " You will never be with me…»:
You will never be with me.
I'll never touch you.
You will remain my unfulfilled dream
In God's unfinished destiny.
Another dream
It soars into the sky like a white crane.
Another dream
Goes into oblivion with each new day…
Don't blame yourself for that
And don't hold grudges against God.
It just became impossible, no matter what you say,
Together we will burn in one love.
Love again
It disturbs us with a blue dream.
Love again
It gives birth to pain in the heart of sweet torment…
Maybe one day you'll understand,
What on earth rastanak ways
Without me, you will not find the cherished love in the world
And you will remain a draw forever.
Fate again
I forgot to enter us in one line.
Fate again
We've never been given a lucky chance in our lives…
You will never be with me.
I'll never touch you.
You will remain a floating blue dream
No one's love has a blind fate…
http://stihi.ru/2019/09/01/7065
Thank you, dear Nadezhda, for your heartfelt and warm feedback!!!
With the warmth of a grateful soul, Valery.
Валерий Старостин 04.02.2021 23:48 Заявить о нарушении
You will never be with me.
I'll never touch you.
You will remain my unfulfilled dream
In God's unfinished destiny.
Another dream
It soars into the sky like a white crane.
Another dream
Goes into oblivion with each new day…
Don't blame yourself for that
And don't hold grudges against God.
It just became impossible, no matter what you say,
Together we will burn in one love.
Love again
It disturbs us with a blue dream.
Love again
It gives birth to pain in the heart of sweet torment…
Maybe one day you'll understand,
What on earth rastanak ways
Without me, you will not find the cherished love in the world
And you will remain a draw forever.
Fate again
I forgot to enter us in one line.
Fate again
We've never been given a lucky chance in our lives…
You will never be with me.
I'll never touch you.
You will remain a floating blue dream
No one's love has a blind fate…
http://stihi.ru/2019/09/01/7065
Thank you, dear Nadezhda, for your heartfelt and warm feedback!!!
With the warmth of a grateful soul, Valery.
Валерий Старостин 04.02.2021 23:48 Заявить о нарушении