Summer went with rain and rumble.
Days pass like pictures that we swipe!
You'd notice Autumn when you stumble
Upon an apple, red and ripe!
Its perfect form evokes lost Eden,
The painful fall from Paradise.
That one that lured Eve`s heart,and even
made her to trust snake`s filthy lies.
Or was it like the fateful apple
That Paris weighed to seal his choice?-
An apple of Discord and Envy
Out of a drainage raised its voice?
Its flawless shape and perfect color
Stand in discord with hidden taste:
Desire veils the acid sour.
The disillusion comes too late.
P.S.Короткий перевод на английский моего стихотворения "О яблоке и совершенстве"
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Summer went..
© Copyright: Алла Лойтц, 2020
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Your poem beautifully captures the transition from summer to autumn, using vivid imagery and metaphorical allusions to create a sense of reflection and introspection.
The comparison of the apple's perfect form to the concept of paradise and temptation evokes themes of temptation, sin, and the loss of innocence. The references to biblical stories such as Adam and Eve, as well as Greek mythology with Paris and the golden apple, add depth and complexity to the poem's exploration of human nature and moral ambiguity.
The contrast between the apple's attractive appearance and its hidden, sour taste serves as a powerful metaphor for the deceptive nature of temptation and desire. Overall, it's a thought-provoking and well-crafted poem that explores universal themes of temptation, disillusionment, and the passage of time. Great job!
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Алла Лойтц 04.05.2024 18:45 • Заявить о нарушении
Your poem beautifully captures the transition from summer to autumn, using vivid imagery and metaphorical allusions to create a sense of reflection and introspection.
The comparison of the apple's perfect form to the concept of paradise and temptation evokes themes of temptation, sin, and the loss of innocence. The references to biblical stories such as Adam and Eve, as well as Greek mythology with Paris and the golden apple, add depth and complexity to the poem's exploration of human nature and moral ambiguity.
The contrast between the apple's attractive appearance and its hidden, sour taste serves as a powerful metaphor for the deceptive nature of temptation and desire. Overall, it's a thought-provoking and well-crafted poem that explores universal themes of temptation, disillusionment, and the passage of time. Great job!
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Алла Лойтц 04.05.2024 18:45 • Заявить о нарушении