A lot of places in this world
Are waiting patiently for you,
So you should keep your sail unfurled
Toward what’s challenging and new.
Then you can find a lot of friends
That will support you in your strife.
Your future certainly depends
On what you have achieved in life.
So fight for what you’re really worth
And never let yourself give up.
Inherit happiness on Earth,
And life will offer you its cup.
No matter what you keep in view,
A lot of places can be yours.
If you speak languages, to you
The world will open all its doors.
Foreign languages
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Great attempt! I really liked rhymes and rhythm!
But I thought that success doesn't depend on what you've achieved in life, 'success' and 'achievements' are synonyms. So success is what you've achieved.
IMHO
Владик Семенов 24.04.2020 04:49 • Заявить о нарушении
But I thought that success doesn't depend on what you've achieved in life, 'success' and 'achievements' are synonyms. So success is what you've achieved.
IMHO
Владик Семенов 24.04.2020 04:49 • Заявить о нарушении
Success is defined as an accomplishment of an aim or purpose, but often, we use this term to describe the status or the amount of money a person has. Achievement is defined as things done successfully. So this sentence literally means "Your status in the society depends on your achievements".
Михаил Демиан 24.04.2020 09:34 Заявить о нарушении
Михаил Демиан 24.04.2020 09:34 Заявить о нарушении
На это произведение написаны 3 рецензии, здесь отображается последняя, остальные - в полном списке.