Ashes...

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Your lips like ellipse of the moon
at night are shining in my near.
You were created as my doom.
And I will whisper to your ear

my sweetest words of love this night.
You're sleeping in the Milky Spaces.
Of stars your eyes are bringing light.
I've never knew such likely graces.

Your hands touch pillow as a snow.
Them seem like frozen in the darkness.
I see a miracle below.
It looks like birds are bulding fuck nest.

They do not sing as yet their song,
when sun is sleeping in your lashes.
I feel my love to you get strong.
Love soon will die in warming ashes…
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Have never knoWN of such delightness, have never felt that kind of pain.
Have always shortened that enlightnment
And suffered much of that constrain.

Sagittarius   02.05.2021 12:25     Заявить о нарушении
Да. Есть о чем подумать.
Согласен.
Спасибо!
С поклоном,

Андрей Чекмарев   02.05.2021 16:38   Заявить о нарушении
Мой любимый стих.
Его хотели опубликовать в GB, но настало время санкций.
Меня под них подмели.
Полковник СВР.

Андрей Чекмарев   14.08.2022 18:42   Заявить о нарушении
На это произведение написаны 2 рецензии, здесь отображается последняя, остальные - в полном списке.