Old fellow Hank

С английским мы, мягко скажем, не друзья. Я только пытаюсь с ним поладить. Выходит не очень, но состряпалось чего-то вот. Есть замечания по корявостям, буду рад услышать.


I walk down this town, under this sky,
Selling my face.
I smile and say passersby: "Hi, guys".
I like this place.

I like to be in Californication.
And I know who to thank.
I am happy to receive this invitation.
Hi, old fellow Hank,
My unknown friend!

Dumb letters of stupid words of silly song.
What do you want from me?
My life was already born fool and wrong
It knows nothing. How to live?


My path lie among the grey thick clouds.
I'm flying, but I'm blind.
Booze, girls, roads are my worlds.
One-way trip. Should probably sleep.


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