I'll hug you very tight. Я обниму тебя очень крепко.
You don't have to listen to me. Ты не обязана меня слушать.
You're my brightest light, Ты мой самый яркий свет,
And without you I can't be free. И без тебя я не могу быть свободным.
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I see you - you're amazing, Я вижу тебя - ты удивительна,
And there is nothing new. И в этом нет ничего нового.
If you ask: "You going crazy?" Если вы спросите: "Вы сходите с ума?"
I would say, that love only you... Я бы сказал, что люблю только тебя...
If you ask me: "Are you okay?" Если вы спросите меня: "ты в порядке?"
I'll be more honest than ever: Я буду честнее, чем когда-либо:
Your beauty was broken my brain, Твоя красота сломала мне мозг,
And my heart will be yours forever. И мое сердце будет твоим навсегда.
I ll hug you very tight
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Очень недурно, только в предпоследней строчке должно быть «has broken my brain»
Удачи и вдохновения!
Рамиро Лебедев-Толмач 21.02.2019 16:15 • Заявить о нарушении
Удачи и вдохновения!
Рамиро Лебедев-Толмач 21.02.2019 16:15 • Заявить о нарушении
My dear friend Daniel!
I am very pleased that you have become a frequent guest of my page. But why not change ‘was’ into ‘has’? Will it really hurt your feelings to have a grammatically more correct form of your verse?
Anyway, you can consult some teacher of English (whom you trust) and see which variant suits you better.
Sincerely yours,
Ramiro L-T.
Рамиро Лебедев-Толмач 22.02.2019 20:08 Заявить о нарушении
I am very pleased that you have become a frequent guest of my page. But why not change ‘was’ into ‘has’? Will it really hurt your feelings to have a grammatically more correct form of your verse?
Anyway, you can consult some teacher of English (whom you trust) and see which variant suits you better.
Sincerely yours,
Ramiro L-T.
Рамиро Лебедев-Толмач 22.02.2019 20:08 Заявить о нарушении
Boy, girl and grandfather
One baby is in the doorway next door.
She is wearing a beautiful skirt.
Grandfather with her in the yard often goes
She asks him to read books aloud
I am five years old and I know all the letters
I will soon read books myself
Then I will go to this beautiful baby
I will smile and we will start playing
Together we will jump and catch-up play
I will tell that girl about a cat.
But her grandfather, that next, I′m a little afraid
- He waves his wand in the yard in the morning.
My mom told me about him:
- With a stick he beats all dogs
But I saw once,
The dog itself approached him,
And sniffed the stick and his feet.
Казаков Юрий Валентинович 26.05.2019 11:44 Заявить о нарушении
One baby is in the doorway next door.
She is wearing a beautiful skirt.
Grandfather with her in the yard often goes
She asks him to read books aloud
I am five years old and I know all the letters
I will soon read books myself
Then I will go to this beautiful baby
I will smile and we will start playing
Together we will jump and catch-up play
I will tell that girl about a cat.
But her grandfather, that next, I′m a little afraid
- He waves his wand in the yard in the morning.
My mom told me about him:
- With a stick he beats all dogs
But I saw once,
The dog itself approached him,
And sniffed the stick and his feet.
Казаков Юрий Валентинович 26.05.2019 11:44 Заявить о нарушении
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