On the river Neva

Neva waves know my feeling,
The wind is also near with me.
Birds are singing, trying healing.
All over in vain: I lost the key...

Spring, the l(w)ife, is needed here,
By thousands of flowers will be greeted.
I won't give up like said the great Shakespeare.
Till the end of stars. Enemy will be defeated.


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Everything is clear and has bright, exact words to feel author's mood.
Thank you.
With respect and best wishes.

Валентина Иванова 4   21.10.2018 08:38     Заявить о нарушении
I'm very grateful for your kind words. The muses are loyal. In all situations.
Sincerely,
Hades Alteniai

Аид Плиний   21.10.2018 21:50   Заявить о нарушении
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