Look at my eyes

Look at my eyes.
There are no fears.
Stars in the skies
Make heartfelt tears.

Tears of your mind,
Tears of your soul,
Tears of a child,
Abandoned and small.

Leave up the cage!
Be just like fire!
Even your Judge
Could be a liar.

No one's been born
To tremble with fright.
The Crown of Thorn
Is laid on to take fight.

I am a Stranger,
Came out from Dark,
The derelict Avenger
With a heartburning mark.

(вдохновение здесь http://www.stihi.ru/2017/10/14/9853)


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Look into my eyes - and you will see, how I hate you,
Look into my heart - and you will read: I want to kill you.
Look into my eyes - so deeply, clearly and well,
Look into my eyes - and sink into the real hell!

Not about you, but about my dark soul.

Виктори Мердок   07.04.2018 10:50     Заявить о нарушении
You know, my dear Victoria, every human makes his own Hell inside, independently with his own hands, by his own deeds. Unfortunately, I can't see the real deep of Your eyes, but I can see Your extraordinary talent, witch could not live in darkness. So, I do think, You just underestimate the state of Your soul. May be, You'd better show me the really unbelievable Abyss of Your eyes? And I'm not joking, of course. Always glad of Your presence. Sincerely Yours.

Влад Светлый   07.04.2018 13:43   Заявить о нарушении
You are absolutely right, dear Vlad. "Every person has it's own hell" - there is name of French film - detective. I didn't see it byt my dear mother saw. Film tells about young man, who has murdered his own little sister.
Here is the lines of my own poem "About Life, Timeless And Eternal", which I wrote at the age of 19:

Who make from own life the hell,
For them their death will bear well!

(Кто сделает себе из жизни ад
Тот смерти в любом виде будет рад).

About my extraordinary talent, as you have said. Maybe I have the talent, but extraordinary or not, I don't know. Some facts of my own life. I don't want to praise myself: I dislike it. Simply these facts will help you to obtain the imagion about my personality.
Go ahead:
At the age of 6 monts old I prononced my first word.
At the age of 6,5 monts - my first sentence.
At the age of 3 years old I began to read without syllabus, the whole words. Also at the age of 3 I began to write difficult texts.
At the age 6 I began to wrote difficult texts without any mistakes! I have never obtained the mark "2" or even "3"! The mark "4" was very rare for me!
At the age of 12 I wrote my first fairy - tale "The Three Red Flowers".
At the age of 13 - my first poem named "The Sea Paysage".
At the age of 12 I entered to musical school.
At the age of 15 I finished it (domra and piano).
At the age of 16 I composed my first text in English for my exam as answer to tickets.
At the age of 19 I wrote my first poem in English "My Prayer To You". This poem is on this site.
At the age of 16 I entered to the university to the philological faculty.
At the age of 19 I wrote my first scientific work "Play upon language: the breaking of connection in the idioms situated in titles in newspapers". My article has been published. I read my article in MSU on the caphedra of the Russian language.
At the age of 23 I finished the university with distinction.
At the age of 23 I became critic of cinema.
I'm going to translate the poem after Bomonster "Stillborn. The Chronicle Of Terror". It will be very curious. It is very difficult, but I will do it tomorrow.
You can read this poem on this website.
The continue wait tomorrow.
With best wishes, Victory.

Виктори Мердок   08.04.2018 22:55   Заявить о нарушении
Dear Victory! I have been dreaming of such a talented and uniq Woman beside, for all the years of my life. Will You be so kind, as to become my lovely wife. I'm ready to stand on my knees. Just imagine, how many talents could probably have our children! This would be incredibly. I bring my glimmering hope before Your feet.

Влад Светлый   09.04.2018 12:46   Заявить о нарушении
Your heart is trembling like a flower
In front of risking to be hurt.
Your look is having a great power
On my desire to be heard.

Sincerely Yours.


Влад Светлый   12.04.2018 02:41   Заявить о нарушении
Thank you very much!

Виктори Мердок   12.04.2018 07:03   Заявить о нарушении
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