\\The winter is white
The autumn is gray
I am not alright
I am not okay
Gutair plays romances
My heart sadly dances
"That's will be okay"
The autumn is gray
The roses are red
The violets are blue
So tired being sad
That's nothing brand-new
At night there is dark
At morning-the light
Another bad mark
And that is still right
I write with the leters
They turns into words
The things that not matters
Is probably hurts
The music is out of my body, in space
Unlike the my souleache, inside
If I can just look at my younger face
And hug all the things I left behind//
20.10.17
The obvious sadness, pt. 1
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guitar
that will be okay
letters
they turn
the things that don`t matter
are probably hurt
the не нужно, уже есть my
Удачи!
Даниил Гергель 22.10.2017 18:59 • Заявить о нарушении
guitar
that will be okay
letters
they turn
the things that don`t matter
are probably hurt
the не нужно, уже есть my
Удачи!
Даниил Гергель 22.10.2017 18:59 • Заявить о нарушении