Do not shoot birds!

Huge black flock
Was flying away from winter to the south.
Huge black flock
Was tired of a long road and *drouth.
In the night, after meeting a big town,
The flock came down to take a rest.
And the whole town was laughing in the morning,
Was amusing itself with the rooks' talks.
And the most funny little rook,
Enjoying the autumn warmth,
Was going down lower on the branches,
Coming closer to trouble.
And the rook did not know, why it happens,
That the bird hinders someone on the ground.
And the warmth went away, the singing of birds ceased.
Only the cry left, overgrowing with the pain around.
Do not shoot in birds!
There is so much space in the sky.   
The flock was flying away straight into the skies.
The sky darkened, hearing the squawk,
And took the pain of the whole flock.
It was the late autumn day.
The birds were flying away, were flying away.



*drouth – noun, dialect-Scottish. (Drought)


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Awkward English (including orthographic mistakes) making the precise understanding of what the author meant nearly impossible, but still not hopeless. Go on venturing but is it really imperative to demonstrate the process of mastering the language to the whole world so insistently!? Well, if for instance you have set your mind to shaping your body perfectly before the forthcoming beach season, will you lay out/download the pictures on which you are shown wet of sweat and exhausted by exercises or prefer taking selfies after you have got as slim and slender as a cypress??

Best regards

Алексей Шиванов   09.05.2021 18:50     Заявить о нарушении
Please send your corrected orthographic errors.
Don't be upset because of my beautiful photos!

Антониа Ирина Голь   04.06.2021 11:04   Заявить о нарушении
You mean ‘send the corrected version of the text upon correction’ of YOUR mistakes, don’t you??

As far as your appearance is concerned no need trying to console me - it was just a metaphor. :):)

Алексей Шиванов   04.06.2021 16:42   Заявить о нарушении
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