U can die tomorrow

U can die tomorrow

And I can die today

I'm a glimpse of sorrow

U r my aching pain


But anyway

In future

Ur grandson sees a shot

U are my list of wonders

That everyone forgot///


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Hi Дрон, I understand the fact that everyone wants to use abreviated words to advertise their business nowadays; however, when you write a poem, maybe, it's better to pay attention to the language. It doesn't matter which one you are using at the moment...
Any way, best of luck!

Ольга Хорнетт   24.09.2017 12:55     Заявить о нарушении