When you decide to leave me
I will not ask you to stay
I will help you to become faster
You decided it yourself. Go Away!
Because I'm an abnormal wife.
Because sometime you chose me
So we will have a happy life.
Together or not - it's not necessary
When you decide to leave me
© Copyright: Аннушка Анчутка, 2017
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Thanks a lot. There are lots of people who try to write something of the kind. But they use unbelievably rare words and collocations spiced with grammar mistakes so that when you read their ‘masterpiece’ you can’t make out what they’re driving at.
In your case you don’t seem to hide behind bookish words. You tell us in a poetic form what you feel. Keep on writing, please!
Truly yours,
Ramiro L-T.
Рамиро Лебедев-Толмач 22.04.2017 16:14 • Заявить о нарушении
In your case you don’t seem to hide behind bookish words. You tell us in a poetic form what you feel. Keep on writing, please!
Truly yours,
Ramiro L-T.
Рамиро Лебедев-Толмач 22.04.2017 16:14 • Заявить о нарушении
It's nice to hear this! But it is not perfectly, i will try to do better!
Аннушка Анчутка 22.04.2017 19:03 Заявить о нарушении
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