I love you so...

My dear friend,
I love you so.
That Feeling
I had not before.
And I should ask myself
Why so?
And who can know
What to do?
And no answer
Comes to mind,
I feel deep pain inside...
Please, come to me
And help decide
To be or not to be.


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There's something special in your lines
That makes us all beleve
That if this lady sometimes cries,
She cries 'bout you and me ...

Really I liked this piece of poetry. Keep on working on it and I hope your 3rd English poem will be even better.

Best wishes, yours truly Ramiro L-T/

Рамиро Лебедев-Толмач   02.04.2017 20:20     Заявить о нарушении