You

I will return with every call,
I will remember your embrace,
In our world,despite it small,
From your heart i'll find the grace.

In your eyes I will remember fire,
With its sparks that I have set,
But only with your soul i felt desire,
When was burning our each sunset.

When you was holding my hand
l found a shelter in your eyes,
But where are you?Here I stand...
There is only me.But with your lies.


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Здравствуйте!
Well done!
"In our world,despite (its small)" - small - прилагательное, its small- непонятно.

Стефан Хэпвинг   28.03.2017 12:43     Заявить о нарушении
Здравствуйте)Благодарю вас за замечание)я имела в виду despite it small) просто опечатка)

Рия Антова   29.03.2017 01:44   Заявить о нарушении