This world of subconscious abounds with wonders,
Crazy ideas and wild dreams,
Lethargic reality wakes me up like a thunder,
Give me room with some air,
I am in a hurry to breath.
Don't run from yourself,
And your odd super qualities,
Look in the mirror and drink till you barf,
All pros and cons of astute personalities,
Are covered with rot under beautiful scarf,
Take my hand, here or there,
Skip aversion to commonplace,
The distortion of truth, unpredictable pain,
I"ll present you some piece,
Of my love and my tenderness,
And you"ll keep it with you in a beautiful frame.
This world of subconscious
© Copyright: Джемма Яшина, 2017
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Thank you for your poetry! I'd like to point out some things - "breathe" ( a verb), "gives" ( reality). I can hear very precisely the rhyme, I really like the meaning you put into your lines!
With love,
Stefan
Стефан Хэпвинг 02.02.2017 01:57 • Заявить о нарушении
With love,
Stefan
Стефан Хэпвинг 02.02.2017 01:57 • Заявить о нарушении
Thanks a lot for your review!
Warm regards,
Jamilia
Джемма Яшина 02.02.2017 23:22 Заявить о нарушении
Warm regards,
Jamilia
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