He treated her really nastily

He treated her really nastily
he called her terrible names.
there were times he even smashed her badly.
But she loved , always forgave.

She ironed his clothes, made dished
she hugged him whenever he came.
He cheated , not even hiding
She knew, but she always forgave.

At night she was praying Jesus.
She wanted to overcome
her craziness, her terrible passion.
Her man brought her only harm.

One day,
it was bright and sunny
she opened her eyes , understood.
She'd lost all her painfull feelings.
Was free , in a wonderfull mood.


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It's perfect! I definetely like it.

Москальчук Андрей   27.10.2016 21:40     Заявить о нарушении
Andrei,
thank you so much for your kind words!

Екатерина Передереева   27.10.2016 21:41   Заявить о нарушении
She'd lost all her painfull feelings.
Was free , in a wonderfull mood.

Such a wohderfull mood- to be free for happiness!

Iam impressed by you poem!a lot of thanks!

Наталия Скворцова Липецк   11.12.2017 21:09   Заявить о нарушении