The diapason of my feelings
to you - is broad.
It Includes everyhing: from visions
to entering the shock.
To become close - we don't need it.
Do not haras!
But anyway it goes I'll see you -
as sinner sees - a paradise.
You cannot bring me pain or harm me.
Cause pain is fear.
There is no fear of those who are free.
themselves - as wind.
The diapason
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So the first two lines should be changed at least to:
The range of my feelings
For you is broad.
The rest is similarly in need of a major revision.
Тургут Элл-Макбак 15.05.2016 00:25 • Заявить о нарушении
The range of my feelings
For you is broad.
The rest is similarly in need of a major revision.
Тургут Элл-Макбак 15.05.2016 00:25 • Заявить о нарушении