Never worry about numbers
Help one person at any time
Start right now and do not slumber
Doing nothing, that's moral crime
Never worry about numbers...
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Good day, Sir!
Your thoughts and style of writing in a different language is quite impressive!
Enjoyed it!
Симона Пекер 12.05.2016 14:18 • Заявить о нарушении
Your thoughts and style of writing in a different language is quite impressive!
Enjoyed it!
Симона Пекер 12.05.2016 14:18 • Заявить о нарушении
Thank you very much! И, разумеется, большое спасибо!)))
Геннадий Фёдорович Миронов 12.05.2016 16:05 Заявить о нарушении
Геннадий Фёдорович Миронов 12.05.2016 16:05 Заявить о нарушении
Буду рад, если вы прочитаете и эти стихи!
http://www.stihi.ru/2016/05/02/1954
http://www.stihi.ru/2016/04/24/4882
http://www.stihi.ru/2016/05/04/7709
Геннадий Фёдорович Миронов 12.05.2016 16:13 Заявить о нарушении
http://www.stihi.ru/2016/05/02/1954
http://www.stihi.ru/2016/04/24/4882
http://www.stihi.ru/2016/05/04/7709
Геннадий Фёдорович Миронов 12.05.2016 16:13 Заявить о нарушении
With pleasure... let's begin!
Find your own light,
Shine it on your soul! [It's within your soul?]
Make it shine so bright,
Not to miss your goal!
And create your pass
Just your special one!
Another way, alas
Your life, sure, would be done.
So be a man and fight
Without any whine.
And find your own light
And shine it, pray you, shine!
- "without any whine" - sounds a bit awkward. I'm assuming you mean whining/or complaining. If so, it would probably sound better if you say..[try not to cry or whine].
But I totally get the message and I like it! )
Симона Пекер 12.05.2016 19:42 Заявить о нарушении
Find your own light,
Shine it on your soul! [It's within your soul?]
Make it shine so bright,
Not to miss your goal!
And create your pass
Just your special one!
Another way, alas
Your life, sure, would be done.
So be a man and fight
Without any whine.
And find your own light
And shine it, pray you, shine!
- "without any whine" - sounds a bit awkward. I'm assuming you mean whining/or complaining. If so, it would probably sound better if you say..[try not to cry or whine].
But I totally get the message and I like it! )
Симона Пекер 12.05.2016 19:42 Заявить о нарушении
I really like the messages that you are trying to put out there and don't want to get into the technicalities of the rhymes or verbal selection.
I am in the same predicament with Russian, so I totally understand, how difficult it is to get the message across, and doing so with proper verbiage, size and punctuation. I have come to the realization that it matters not, how we get the message across, the key is to continue to do so, as best as we know how.
And if you make a [connection] of thought and feelings with only 1 person, you've reached your goal, my friend.
And from where I'm standing, I think you did! )
Keep up the good work!
It warms my heart to see that on a website, that is predominantly Russian, there is an opportunity of soul expression in different languages.
To me, that's key to uniting people. Love it! )
Симона Пекер 12.05.2016 19:52 Заявить о нарушении
I am in the same predicament with Russian, so I totally understand, how difficult it is to get the message across, and doing so with proper verbiage, size and punctuation. I have come to the realization that it matters not, how we get the message across, the key is to continue to do so, as best as we know how.
And if you make a [connection] of thought and feelings with only 1 person, you've reached your goal, my friend.
And from where I'm standing, I think you did! )
Keep up the good work!
It warms my heart to see that on a website, that is predominantly Russian, there is an opportunity of soul expression in different languages.
To me, that's key to uniting people. Love it! )
Симона Пекер 12.05.2016 19:52 Заявить о нарушении
Thank you very much one more time! That's not just words. I, really, thank you for your worm and sincere opinion and analysis. Most of these English verses are just rhymed comments on somebody's citations in FB. And I tried not to change the original words. That's the story about "Shine it on your soul". And your proposal, "It's within your soul" was my variant, too, but the rule is the rule. Now about "Without any whine". That is my mistake. I was in such a hurry, that... "Haste make waste". I think Russian proverb is more to the point, "Поспешишь, людей насмешишь"!
Let's express our souls and unite people! I love it, too.
Thank you very much!
Геннадий Фёдорович Миронов 13.05.2016 09:25 Заявить о нарушении
Let's express our souls and unite people! I love it, too.
Thank you very much!
Геннадий Фёдорович Миронов 13.05.2016 09:25 Заявить о нарушении