Young boy saying bullshit

it's not the influence of spring
It's not just sympathy indeed
This wasn't caused by alco drink
It's not a feeling, this is need

The need of shine that you emit
Desire for your gentle kiss
I know this is the greatest treat
To be with you in love and peace

Your collar bone is masterpiece
That I enjoy when look at you
It's very difficult to breath
Discovering your eyes of blue

I can't express all my emotions
That try to break out in a flow
With only simple human motions
Which are not helpful anymore

I love
    You know
          The cheerful
                Cute
                Fragile
                Girl


                04.04.2014


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liked it
 me short impromptu
to boy :)
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young girl:)answer:
— you look at me as if I'm the only girl around,
you make me feel important and never let me down.
If you said you were cold,
I would wrap my arms around you.
If you said you were thirsty I would give you the ocean blue.
I would give you anything: the moon, the stars, the sunset too.
This heart in my hands I hold out to you.
:)!

Улыбаться   13.03.2016 19:53     Заявить о нарушении
Спасибо огромное за великолепный творческий комментарий!Стихотворение шикарное, но я бы расстроился, если я tthirsty, а мне the ocean blue with the salty water((

Сам Написалъ   13.03.2016 20:32   Заявить о нарушении