Calling your soul...

Данный текст является переводом на английский язык моей авторской песни "Душа, жди!"
Буду благодарна знатокам языка за возможные замечания в грамматике.

***
Again, the rain,
Into memory rages storm.
Tears in eyes are burning.
The river of thoughts
Breaks down all dykes,
My soul is dying!

Endless years through too much centuries
I was waiting a trice of  this meeting!
So, now I know
That words are flying
To the space
Where the soul is singing,
And through infinite times and universes,
The soul will find you
Where the love is living,
Just believe!

Refrain:
Among the ancient ruins,
Under arras's shadow,
I'll find you - just wait!
In the guise of some other,
Through long centuries time,
I will be with you - again!

***
Stars are telling us,
That you don't find in books,
So, let's dream!
There I'll come to you,
I promise!

Forever together we will be,
And to the stars we'll fly,
Under stardust
Into the night
We will reach the light.

Refrain:
Among the ancient ruins,
Under arras's shadow,
I'll find you - just wait!
In the guise of some other,
Through long centuries time,
I will be with you - again!

***
The soul is alive,
If the love waits it in us!
Grief inside will gone,
The hope will take the reign,
In memory preserving that face,
Which is dear to us,
Which gives meaning to live!
I will wait for you in dream!


Refrain:
Among the ancient ruins,
Under arras's shadow,
I'll find you - just wait!
In the guise of some other,
Through long centuries time,
I will be with you - again!