Speak my name
The sky got lost in shivering eerie;
Someone denied the sanity it chased.
When black and white repeat in last embrace
Did someone switch it off to bury me?
It is my cure... Perhaps it only was
Encouraging my faith for something more
Where sound retains. I cannot reach its shore
So who will make me free of this remorse?
These tears were nothing but a pure shame
Yet aftermath is near. I feel it clear.
Somewhere beneath my attitude to fear
Unrecognized solution speaks its name.
My lips still speak it too unless you stare
Like as your voice got frozen in your throat
Will you escape from our common boat
Or try to stay and take with me the air?
These tears were nothing but a pure shame;
But someone calls me, tries to switch it on
My pleasure sparks. No need to breathe alone
When someone's lips desire to speak my name...
21/02/16.
Speak my name
© Copyright: Мари Вальтер, 2016
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Mary, in my opinion, it's a very rare talent - to write so well in both languages, Russian and English!
You are unique...
I wish you all the best!
Let your talent shine!
With my best, best wishes and encouragement,
Irina
Ирина Щёголева-Экштут 27.03.2016 21:23 • Заявить о нарушении
You are unique...
I wish you all the best!
Let your talent shine!
With my best, best wishes and encouragement,
Irina
Ирина Щёголева-Экштут 27.03.2016 21:23 • Заявить о нарушении
Thank you for this touching review! I'm pleased that you appreciate my endeavours. I'll definitely continue).
Мари Вальтер 27.03.2016 21:31 Заявить о нарушении
Мари Вальтер 27.03.2016 21:31 Заявить о нарушении
Mary, I thought, it would be very beneficial for you to start publishing your poems on English poetry sites.
My quick search gave me this site immediately: http://allpoetry.com/
I am sure, there are other sites in English as well...
If you need my help finding them - please, let me know.
Your talent deserves international attention!
Good luck to you,
Irina
Ирина Щёголева-Экштут 28.03.2016 14:11 Заявить о нарушении
My quick search gave me this site immediately: http://allpoetry.com/
I am sure, there are other sites in English as well...
If you need my help finding them - please, let me know.
Your talent deserves international attention!
Good luck to you,
Irina
Ирина Щёголева-Экштут 28.03.2016 14:11 Заявить о нарушении
Thank you for this link! It's extremely kind of you. I'll definitely publish my poems there.
Мари Вальтер 07.04.2016 23:27 Заявить о нарушении
Мари Вальтер 07.04.2016 23:27 Заявить о нарушении
There are other sites as well... Just do the search!
This one is one of the big portals, I suppose...
Such poets should be known internationally!
Good luck!
Irina
Ирина Щёголева-Экштут 07.04.2016 23:47 Заявить о нарушении
This one is one of the big portals, I suppose...
Such poets should be known internationally!
Good luck!
Irina
Ирина Щёголева-Экштут 07.04.2016 23:47 Заявить о нарушении