Panda wears black-and-white,
Eats a bamboo - day and night,
Lives in China, people say.
Can we visit it today?
Panda
© Copyright: Михаил Солдатов, 2016
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Михаил, maybe: "Eats bamboo all day and night..." as "bamboo" is a general term. However, it was fun to read, thanks. Good luck!
Kind regards,
Ольга Хорнетт 13.04.2017 00:36 • Заявить о нарушении
Kind regards,
Ольга Хорнетт 13.04.2017 00:36 • Заявить о нарушении
Thank you very much! You are right, "bamboo day" looks unusual :)
I put a hyphen to separate "bamboo" and "day".
Nice to talk to the language expert. Have you seen my translations to English, can you say something about them?
For example this one: http://stihi.ru/2011/12/20/4517
Михаил Солдатов 16.04.2017 22:07 Заявить о нарушении
I put a hyphen to separate "bamboo" and "day".
Nice to talk to the language expert. Have you seen my translations to English, can you say something about them?
For example this one: http://stihi.ru/2011/12/20/4517
Михаил Солдатов 16.04.2017 22:07 Заявить о нарушении
Hi Михаил, please don't overestimate my abilities :-) I am not an expert but I live in the UK and tutor Russian & English, that's all :-)
I may look at your poem tomorrow...
All the best!
Ольга Хорнетт 16.04.2017 23:06 Заявить о нарушении
I may look at your poem tomorrow...
All the best!
Ольга Хорнетт 16.04.2017 23:06 Заявить о нарушении