I must have been about eleven...

I must have been about eleven,
heart-wise, not more than, even seven,
when I joined -camping [sleep-away]..
still vividly recall that day...

The ad sent home to all the parents,
made it appealing with assurance:
three meals, activities galore,
a river and of course much more...

A nifty place to spend a summer,
a place for kids that's full of wonder!
Of course the ad, had parents -"SOLD!"
Some felt they hit a pot of gold...

Not too expensive - for full summer,
"where kids have fun and can discover"-
was how the advertisement read,
and its deliverance widespread...!

Upon arrival - eyes wide open,
the sense of wonder quickly woken:
new friends, fresh air, arcades and all:
pool, tennis, outside volleyball...

Fun! But not without a discipline,
just like in school, we had a principle,
two counselors to a group of ten,
to watch and sound-off rules again...!

The morning passed with introductions,
another set with new instructions,
now --it's time to see the river-
this is where I start to quiver...

Not too familiar with what's swimming,
decided NOT to go in dipping...
not really making a big deal -
(an eleven-year old appeal)...

"YOU MUST GO IN" - said female counselor,
who looked to me, like a big bouncer*
"don't be a troublemaker - KID,
go in...it's just a little squid..."

Not going in - I softly stated,
not knowing what the outcome fated...
As she approached in all her grace,
to let one rip - across my face...

I stood in shock for quite a while,
then ran and ran...maybe a mile,
and hid behind a hollow tree,
to cry where no one would see me...

Not sure what made me recollect, or
on that camp experience reflect...
It's when I see my children's eyes,
the childhood memories arise...

-----------
*bouncer - a person whose duty is to throw troublemakers out


Рецензии
I admire how you can turn otherwise hardly poetic stuff (stories like this one or that jury thing) into poetry, beautiful poetry at that.
Anyway, that's pretty traumatizing experience you had there. The counselor should've been reporeted.

Евгений Шпунт   12.12.2015 00:16     Заявить о нарушении
Thank you, Gene

She begged me not to tell anyone, apologizing for what happened.
And I never told a soul, until now.. )

The secret (that remained between us), gave me "silent" permission, not to go into that lake. At that time, I considered that a victory.

..happy to see you! )

Симона Пекер   12.12.2015 18:08   Заявить о нарушении
At least you got something out of it. )
Ditto.

Евгений Шпунт   12.12.2015 20:09   Заявить о нарушении
..lessons are extrapolated, not just from positive experiences! )

Симона Пекер   12.12.2015 20:15   Заявить о нарушении