Broken hearts
And lonely souls!
Fall to parts,
Give in to foes...
Naif dreams,
Romantic mood!
Oh, it seems
You are a prude!
Oh, how sweet!
That's so nice!
Now - on your feet,
Caught by surprise!
You're shaking...why?
You feel confused?
You, little sly,
Look so amused!
Cause deep inside
You truly know
That you are right
To fall that low!
I guess you like
The way you dress,
The way you hike
Behind your mess!
All broken hearts
And lonely souls -
Your playing cards,
Your crushing doles!
So just go on
And smile a lot!
Cause you're wrong
Cause you're caught!
22:48 27.10.2015
Broken hearts and lonely souls 27. 10. 2015
© Copyright: Баяр Сергебаев, 2015
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It's good dramatic poem and it's so unussual! I suppose you are not along.
Светлана Столярская 2 21.11.2015 02:10 • Заявить о нарушении
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Thank you for your response! I believe everyone feels lonely sometimes, it's quite natural. But what in my opinion is really important, is how we deal with this state of loneliness, even if it is temporary.
Баяр Сергебаев 21.11.2015 02:24 Заявить о нарушении
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