Мастер и колокол

Просыпался, думая: "Что звенит?"
Говорили: сердце, сходи к врачу.
Звук по восходящей летел в зенит,
где уже неслышим. Лишь по лучу

ультрафиолета в тревожных снах
понимал, что вот он, от звука след,
что он словно ангельская блесна
ловит сны земные, в которых свет.

и звучит объемно, как божий храм,
будто тело гулкое, словно медь.
Понял он однажды: уже пора,
а иначе можно и не успеть.

Рисовал эскизы, искал металл,
и умельцев опытных по стране,
отливал сияющий в снах хорал,
но не то все было, не как во сне.

Но однажды колокол зазвучал
 и наполнил радостью все окрест...
Проявилось данное. Лишь не знал,
как сказать-то: блАговест, благовЕст?

перевод Миледи Ольги  http://www.stihi.ru/2015/10/21/9681
Master and Temple-bell...

 He's woke up in thinking, 'what's jingling?'
 they said: visit doctor to check your heart.
 There sound's ascending  flew overhead,
 where it's inaudible in calm, just in beam...

 Of ultraviolet rayes... in anxiety dreams
 he can see:  it is Track from the sound,
 It's seemed alike the angelic baubles
 caught all dreams of the earth - in light...

 And it sounds volume, like God's temple,
 as if Echoing body, it's like copper jingling.
 At once he understood: already it's Time,
 otherwise you can't ever construct it...

 He drew Sketches, he searched for metal
 and experienced crafts men of land.
 He casts Fantasy dream: shining Chorale,
 but all wasn't like wishes in brain...

 But once, Temple-bell - sang and rang,
 and it filled with joy all neighborhoods...
 It is showed given. Just he didn't know
 how to say it: the good news or the bliss?


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Master and Temple-bell...

He's woke up in thinking, 'what's jingling?'
they said: visit doctor to check your heart.
There sound's ascending flew overhead,
where it's inaudible in calm, just in beam...

From ultraviolet rayes... in anxiety dreams
he can see: it is Track from the sound,
It's seemed alike the angelic baubles
caught all dreams of the earth - in light...

And it sounds volume, like God's temple,
as if Echoing flesh, it's like copper jingling.
At once he understood: already it's Time,
otherwise you can't ever construct it...

He drew Sketches, he searched for metal
and experienced crafts men of land.
He casts Fantasy dream: shining Chorale,
but all wasn't like wishes in brain...

But once, Temple-bell - sang and rang,
and it filled with joy all neighborhoods...
It's showed given. Just he didn't know
how to say it: the good news or the bliss?

Луиза Алиса   26.10.2020 17:13     Заявить о нарушении
Master and Temple-bell...

He's woken up in thinking: 'what's jingling?'
They said: visit doctor to check your heart.
There's sound ascending flew overhead,
where's it inaudible in calm, just in a beam...

From ultraviolet rayes... in anxiety dreams
he can see: it is Track from sound,
It's seemed like angelic baubles
caught all dreams of earth in light...

And it sounds volume, like God's temple,
like echoing flesh, as copper jingling.
At once he understood: already it's Time,
otherwise you can't ever construct it...

He drew Sketches, he searched for metal
and experienced crafts men of land.
He casts Fantasy dream: shining Chorale,
but all wasn't like wishes in brain...

But once, Temple-bell sang and rang,
and it filled with joy all neighborhoods...
It's showed given. Just he didn't know
how to say it: the good news or the bliss?

Бабка Ежка   13.03.2024 14:55   Заявить о нарушении
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