Inside you hatred simmers - let it go...

Inside you hatred simmers - let it go.
Hold on and harness anger. Feel again
The soft caress of hope. Shine and glow.
Forget the plight, the soot, the leaden rain.

A falcon free traversing the terrain,
Spread out your wings. Arise above the ground.
Behold the haze decaying, grain by grain.
Divide the truth from empty runaround.


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There's so much to see and feel with this piece of yours. There's so much sadness about the whole thing. Enjoyed every line, the wording, the rhyme, the sense. Just wonder what it is like to write verses in the language which is not your mother-tongue? Must be extremely intriguing.

Элла Нестерик   11.07.2016 21:37     Заявить о нарушении
Thanks for reading!
Well, it's like I've somehow learned to think in English from time to time... Thus it becomes kind of natural to write poetry in it... Yet it feels like going beyond the horizon into a brand-new world...

Yours sincerely,

Виктория Химмель-Штерн   13.07.2016 15:42   Заявить о нарушении