Резво ты идёшь за мной вослед.
Выбрала не зря я цель - кровать.
Я вчера купила новый плед,
Мог бы он заинтересовать.
Ты покупку изучал всерьёз.
Объяснил, что высока цена
И проверка прочности нужна,
Чтоб не лить спустя полгода слёз!..
Ну, а как на прочность проверять?
Верный способ ты, конечно знал!
Заласкал и залюбил... Финал:
Не уложишь вновь в причёску прядь...
Да хитросплетение двух тел...
А что плед? Прошёл проверку, цел!
___________________________¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶
_______¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶_________¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶
______¶¶_______¶¶¶______¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶
_____¶¶______¶¶_¶¶______¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶
_____¶_____¶¶¶¶¶¶¶______¶¶_¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶
_____¶____¶¶¶____¶______¶___¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶
_____¶¶___¶¶¶__¶¶¶¶____¶¶____¶¶¶¶¶¶¶
_____¶¶___¶¶¶¶_¶¶¶______¶¶¶_¶¶¶¶¶¶¶
____¶¶¶¶___¶_¶¶¶¶________¶¶¶¶¶____¶¶¶
____¶¶¶¶¶__¶¶¶¶¶¶____________¶¶¶___¶¶¶
___¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶_¶_¶¶¶¶___________¶¶______¶¶
__¶¶______¶_¶¶¶¶_¶__________¶¶_______¶¶¶
__¶_______¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶_________¶_________¶¶
__¶_____¶¶__¶¶¶_¶¶¶________¶¶__________¶
__¶______¶¶__¶¶_¶¶¶¶______¶¶___________¶
__¶¶¶¶____¶¶__¶¶_¶¶¶¶___¶¶¶____¶¶¶____¶¶
___¶_¶¶____¶¶¶¶¶_¶¶_¶__¶¶______¶______¶¶
___¶__¶¶___¶¶¶¶¶¶¶__¶¶¶¶_____¶¶______¶¶
___¶___¶¶____¶¶_¶¶¶__¶¶_____¶¶______¶¶
___¶____¶¶¶___¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶____¶¶¶_______¶
___¶______¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶___¶¶¶¶________¶¶
___¶________¶¶____¶¶__¶¶¶¶_________¶
__¶¶_____¶¶¶_______¶¶¶¶¶¶¶________¶¶
__¶¶___¶¶¶__________¶¶¶¶¶¶________¶¶¶
_¶¶__¶¶¶_______¶_____¶¶¶¶_________¶¶¶¶
¶¶_¶¶¶________¶¶¶_____¶¶___________¶_¶¶
¶¶____________¶_¶______¶___________¶¶_¶¶
¶¶___________¶¶¶¶¶¶____¶¶__________¶¶__¶¶¶¶
_¶¶_________¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶____¶¶_______¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶_¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶
_¶¶¶______¶¶¶¶_____¶¶____¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶__¶__¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶
___¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶___¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶___¶¶¶_____¶¶¶¶_¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶
_____¶¶¶¶¶__¶¶¶_______¶¶¶___¶¶¶¶¶___¶¶¶¶¶¶¶
________¶¶______________¶____¶¶_¶¶¶____¶¶¶¶¶
_________¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶____¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶
__________________________¶¶_____¶¶¶¶
__________________________¶¶¶¶______¶¶¶¶
_____________________________¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶
** 13.05.2015 **
Благодарю Александра за чудо-отклик - http://www.stihi.ru/2015/12/04/4848
Проверка на прочность
© Copyright: Анюта Аксёнова, 2015
Свидетельство о публикации №115052203197
Свидетельство о публикации №115052203197
Рецензии
Она несла красивый плед,_
Меняли дома отопленье,
Не знал подвыпивший сосед
Об этом , думал - соблазненье.
Нарисовал букеты роз
И лепестки по всей кровати
В его сознании неслось,-
Где этот чертов выключатель?
О слово чудное, диван!
О , плед верблюжьей чистой шерсти!
О гений, Штраус Иоганн!
О что вы душу рвете , черти?...
Соседка, пригласи на чай!
На плед, на твой полюбоваться,-
Сосед промолвил невзначай,
Хочу в любви на нем признаться.
Ну разувайся, проходи,
Садись на край, не раздевайся,
Я чай накрою, погоди,
Пей, сколько влезет , не стесняйся.
Ну что робеешь, обними,
Прижми к сердечку, я готова,
Ай разлюбил уж, не томи,
Я все пойму и с полуслова.
Но как сказать ей напрямик,
О мир,- ты секс,- тебя люблю я,
Но наш герой под пледом сник,
О бедах ЖКХ горюя.
Александр Фаронов 04.12.2015 13:41 • Заявить о нарушении
Меняли дома отопленье,
Не знал подвыпивший сосед
Об этом , думал - соблазненье.
Нарисовал букеты роз
И лепестки по всей кровати
В его сознании неслось,-
Где этот чертов выключатель?
О слово чудное, диван!
О , плед верблюжьей чистой шерсти!
О гений, Штраус Иоганн!
О что вы душу рвете , черти?...
Соседка, пригласи на чай!
На плед, на твой полюбоваться,-
Сосед промолвил невзначай,
Хочу в любви на нем признаться.
Ну разувайся, проходи,
Садись на край, не раздевайся,
Я чай накрою, погоди,
Пей, сколько влезет , не стесняйся.
Ну что робеешь, обними,
Прижми к сердечку, я готова,
Ай разлюбил уж, не томи,
Я все пойму и с полуслова.
Но как сказать ей напрямик,
О мир,- ты секс,- тебя люблю я,
Но наш герой под пледом сник,
О бедах ЖКХ горюя.
Александр Фаронов 04.12.2015 13:41 • Заявить о нарушении
Она несла пакет (в нём плед)
Без "задних" мыслей о постели...
Не ведая: её сосед
Уже свои имеет цели!..
Он шёл за неё налегке
И в ожидании успеха...
А трещины на потолке
И отопленье - не помеха! ;)
```````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````````````
``````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1````````````````
``````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1```````````````
``````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1``````````````
`````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1`````````````
```````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1```````````
````````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1```````````
``````````11`1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1```````````
`````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1````````````
```````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1```````````
`````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶```````````
````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````
```````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````
```````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶```````````
```````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1```````````
```````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1```````````
```````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1``````````
```````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶`````````
```````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1``````
```````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶111¶¶1`1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1````
```````1¶¶¶11¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶```1¶````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1``
```````1¶¶¶1`¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶````11```````1¶¶¶¶¶¶`
```````1¶¶¶¶``¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1``````1````````1¶¶¶¶¶
````````¶¶¶1``1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````````````1¶¶¶
```````1¶¶¶¶```¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````````````¶¶¶¶
````````¶¶¶¶``1¶¶¶¶¶¶11111¶¶¶1``````````````¶¶¶¶¶1
````````¶¶¶¶``¶¶¶¶1````````1¶¶¶¶¶1```````1¶¶¶¶¶1``
`````````¶¶¶1`¶¶1````````````1¶¶¶¶¶````1¶¶¶¶1`````
`````````1¶¶¶¶¶1```````1`11```1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1````````
``````````1¶¶¶1```11111111111`1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1```````````
`1```1`1```1¶¶1``11111111111111¶¶¶¶¶``````````````
```111111```¶¶¶1`111111111111111¶¶¶¶¶`````````````
``111111111``¶¶¶1`1111111111111¶¶¶¶¶¶¶````````````
111111111111`1¶¶¶11111111111111¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1```````````
`111111111111`1¶¶¶111111111111¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶```````````
`111111111111111¶¶¶1111111111¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1``````````
``11111111111111¶¶¶¶¶11111111¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````
```1111111111111¶¶¶¶¶¶¶11111¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````
`````111111111111¶¶¶¶111111¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````
````````1111111111¶¶¶¶¶¶1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1``````````
```````````1111111111111¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1``````````
``````````````¶¶¶111111¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶```````````
``````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶```````````
``````````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶```````````
``````````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1```````````
``````````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶````````````
````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶``¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1`````````````
````````````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶``¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````````
`````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶`1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1``````````````
`````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶`1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶```````````````
`````````````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶`1¶¶¶¶¶¶1```````````````
``````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶`1¶¶¶¶¶¶````````````````
``````````````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶`¶¶¶¶¶¶1````````````````
```````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶1`¶¶¶¶¶¶`````````````````
```````````````````1¶¶¶¶¶1`¶¶¶¶¶1`````````````````
```````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶``¶¶¶¶¶1`````````````````
```````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶``¶¶¶¶¶1`````````````````
``````````````````1¶¶¶¶¶1``¶¶¶¶¶1`````````````````
``````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶1`1¶¶¶¶¶``````````````````
``````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶1`¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````````````
``````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶1`¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````````````
``````````````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1``````````````````
```````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶```````````````````
```````````````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶````````````````````
````````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1````````````````````
`````````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶`````````````````````
`````````````````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````````````````
`````````````````````1¶¶¶¶¶1``````````````````````
`````````````````````1¶¶¶¶¶```````````````````````
`````````````````````1¶¶¶¶1```````````````````````
```````````````````1`1¶¶¶¶1```````````````````````
```````````````````11`¶¶¶1````````````````````````
``````````````````````¶¶¶1````````````````````````
``````````````````````¶¶¶¶````````````````````````
``````````````````````¶¶¶¶1`````````
Александр, я в восторге от Вашего поэтического отклика! :)
Спасибо огромное! )))
Кстати, у меня о пледе (хотя нет, о покрывале) ещё одна история имеется - http://www.stihi.ru/2013/04/21/3122
;)
Анюта Аксёнова 04.12.2015 13:29 Заявить о нарушении
Без "задних" мыслей о постели...
Не ведая: её сосед
Уже свои имеет цели!..
Он шёл за неё налегке
И в ожидании успеха...
А трещины на потолке
И отопленье - не помеха! ;)
```````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````````````
``````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1````````````````
``````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1```````````````
``````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1``````````````
`````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1`````````````
```````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1```````````
````````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1```````````
``````````11`1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1```````````
`````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1````````````
```````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1```````````
`````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶```````````
````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````
```````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````
```````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶```````````
```````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1```````````
```````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1```````````
```````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1``````````
```````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶`````````
```````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1``````
```````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶111¶¶1`1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1````
```````1¶¶¶11¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶```1¶````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1``
```````1¶¶¶1`¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶````11```````1¶¶¶¶¶¶`
```````1¶¶¶¶``¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1``````1````````1¶¶¶¶¶
````````¶¶¶1``1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````````````1¶¶¶
```````1¶¶¶¶```¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````````````¶¶¶¶
````````¶¶¶¶``1¶¶¶¶¶¶11111¶¶¶1``````````````¶¶¶¶¶1
````````¶¶¶¶``¶¶¶¶1````````1¶¶¶¶¶1```````1¶¶¶¶¶1``
`````````¶¶¶1`¶¶1````````````1¶¶¶¶¶````1¶¶¶¶1`````
`````````1¶¶¶¶¶1```````1`11```1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1````````
``````````1¶¶¶1```11111111111`1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1```````````
`1```1`1```1¶¶1``11111111111111¶¶¶¶¶``````````````
```111111```¶¶¶1`111111111111111¶¶¶¶¶`````````````
``111111111``¶¶¶1`1111111111111¶¶¶¶¶¶¶````````````
111111111111`1¶¶¶11111111111111¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1```````````
`111111111111`1¶¶¶111111111111¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶```````````
`111111111111111¶¶¶1111111111¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1``````````
``11111111111111¶¶¶¶¶11111111¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````
```1111111111111¶¶¶¶¶¶¶11111¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````
`````111111111111¶¶¶¶111111¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````
````````1111111111¶¶¶¶¶¶1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1``````````
```````````1111111111111¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1``````````
``````````````¶¶¶111111¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶```````````
``````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶```````````
``````````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶```````````
``````````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1```````````
``````````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶````````````
````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶``¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1`````````````
````````````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶``¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````````
`````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶`1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1``````````````
`````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶`1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶```````````````
`````````````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶`1¶¶¶¶¶¶1```````````````
``````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶`1¶¶¶¶¶¶````````````````
``````````````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶`¶¶¶¶¶¶1````````````````
```````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶1`¶¶¶¶¶¶`````````````````
```````````````````1¶¶¶¶¶1`¶¶¶¶¶1`````````````````
```````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶``¶¶¶¶¶1`````````````````
```````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶``¶¶¶¶¶1`````````````````
``````````````````1¶¶¶¶¶1``¶¶¶¶¶1`````````````````
``````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶1`1¶¶¶¶¶``````````````````
``````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶1`¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````````````
``````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶1`¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````````````
``````````````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1``````````````````
```````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶```````````````````
```````````````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶````````````````````
````````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶1````````````````````
`````````````````````¶¶¶¶¶¶¶¶`````````````````````
`````````````````````1¶¶¶¶¶¶``````````````````````
`````````````````````1¶¶¶¶¶1``````````````````````
`````````````````````1¶¶¶¶¶```````````````````````
`````````````````````1¶¶¶¶1```````````````````````
```````````````````1`1¶¶¶¶1```````````````````````
```````````````````11`¶¶¶1````````````````````````
``````````````````````¶¶¶1````````````````````````
``````````````````````¶¶¶¶````````````````````````
``````````````````````¶¶¶¶1`````````
Александр, я в восторге от Вашего поэтического отклика! :)
Спасибо огромное! )))
Кстати, у меня о пледе (хотя нет, о покрывале) ещё одна история имеется - http://www.stihi.ru/2013/04/21/3122
;)
Анюта Аксёнова 04.12.2015 13:29 Заявить о нарушении
Пожалуйста, Анюта. Ваше развитие мысли мне тоже понравилось, Сейчас прочту по ссылке. С уважением Александр.
Александр Фаронов 04.12.2015 14:54 Заявить о нарушении
Александр Фаронов 04.12.2015 14:54 Заявить о нарушении
На это произведение написано 14 рецензий, здесь отображается последняя, остальные - в полном списке.