Delirium

The very core. The deepest inner thoughts
Brought back to life with agony and torture.
Forsaken once, they come again in lots,
A triviality transforming all my fortune.

This torment trails a certain spell of death,
Yet I have strayed too far. In rage my mind is soaking.
Until the desperate and martyred final breath
The words of truth will rest in air unspoken.


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Sounds good, but tastes bitter.I once experienced similar sensations and think you managed to create a live and complete image of what we call delirium.

Элла Нестерик   11.07.2016 21:52     Заявить о нарушении
Delighted to see my poem acclaimed:)
Actually it was written under the influence of a song called 'Citizen Zero' by Kamelot...it did contribute a lot to the creating of such an image.

Yours sincerely,

Виктория Химмель-Штерн   13.07.2016 15:45   Заявить о нарушении
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