"Бессонница" http://www.stihi.ru/2015/02/06/4599
Лишь мыслей неспешная прялка
Споёт безо всяких табу...
...Кто глянет вдруг взором ожившим,
Пройдёт по землице босой
И ...выскользнет тенью неслышной
Лишь вымочив ноги росой?
(Евгения Артёменко)
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НАПРАСНО...
Не каждый поэт так напишет,
Как я это сделать могу!
В мечтах устремляясь всё выше,
Пройдусь по росе на лугу,
Сверкающим взором окину
Землицу родную свою
И мыслей неспешных мякину
В без всяких табу воспою...
...Простуда, распухшие гланды...
Творить в состоянье таком?!
Увы, не сберёг я таланта,
Напрасно ходил босиком.
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Конкурс Пародий
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