Была я яблоком раздора.
Вкушали разные меня.
Таперича - певица хора,
Стою, как образец позора,
Маленько губы шевеля.
Поём мы в хоре пенсионном.
Я запевалкою у них.
Есть старички с хорошим тоном
И с тенором, и с баритоном...
Востребована я у них.
А чо на койке мне валяться,
Какая польза, чо за прок?
Да тут ко мне ещё ластятся...
Зачем мне с юностью прощаться,
Когда хватают за бочок.
Спрос рождает предложение
© Copyright: Геннадий Давыдов 3, 2014
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Рецензии
Привет, Гена!
сатира... ))) хорошая...
что-то мне "бур... бабушки" вспомнились и на фото - отпад, даже похожа одна
с улыбкой, )))))))))
Мила
Людмила Тягельская 21.11.2014 08:55 • Заявить о нарушении
сатира... ))) хорошая...
что-то мне "бур... бабушки" вспомнились и на фото - отпад, даже похожа одна
с улыбкой, )))))))))
Мила
Людмила Тягельская 21.11.2014 08:55 • Заявить о нарушении
Приветствую, друзья! )))
Согласна с Милой: у меня такие же ассоциации возникли и по описанию, и глядя на фото! )))
Вот и правильно, пусть веселится, пока магёт, и берёт от жизни по максимуму! )))
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Кстати, есть кое-что в темку (приглашаю) - http://www.stihi.ru/2014/08/05/2471
Хорошего дня, Мила и Гена! )))
Анюта Аксёнова 21.11.2014 11:10 Заявить о нарушении
Согласна с Милой: у меня такие же ассоциации возникли и по описанию, и глядя на фото! )))
Вот и правильно, пусть веселится, пока магёт, и берёт от жизни по максимуму! )))
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Кстати, есть кое-что в темку (приглашаю) - http://www.stihi.ru/2014/08/05/2471
Хорошего дня, Мила и Гена! )))
Анюта Аксёнова 21.11.2014 11:10 Заявить о нарушении
Милочка! Большое спасибо за рецензию! Очень рад, что тебя немного улыбнул!
Всего тебе доброго!))))))))))
Геннадий Давыдов 3 21.11.2014 12:22 Заявить о нарушении
Всего тебе доброго!))))))))))
Геннадий Давыдов 3 21.11.2014 12:22 Заявить о нарушении
На это произведение написаны 2 рецензии, здесь отображается последняя, остальные - в полном списке.