Away! - she said,
Away! - they said,
Away... - I'll go...
Suddenly
Away! - was said,
Away! - were said,
Away... As column I've curdled.
"Who said "Away!"? - she asked,
"Who said "Away!"? - they asked,
"Who said "Away..." - don't know,
"You ordered me away to go...
Now you are ordered just the same...
That's only the other level
Of forcing somebody
To go out of their dwell...
So let it be! The other spell...
Go out of the dwell!!!"
Away! - she went,
Away! - they went,
Away... - I still was at the place...
A way, where today is she, are they...
Is going somewhere to some plain...
Away...
© Copyright: Людмила 31, 2014
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The poem is nice.
There's some advice:
Never make people go away.
It's not a game to play.
Please, mind tiny corrections:
right: you ordered me ...
right: that's only another level
But the author is always right.
Try, never give up!
Надин Прохорова 12.08.2014 15:52 • Заявить о нарушении
There's some advice:
Never make people go away.
It's not a game to play.
Please, mind tiny corrections:
right: you ordered me ...
right: that's only another level
But the author is always right.
Try, never give up!
Надин Прохорова 12.08.2014 15:52 • Заявить о нарушении
Great thanks for your attention to some faults! Best wishes, Lyudmila
Людмила 31 12.08.2014 23:32 Заявить о нарушении
Людмила 31 12.08.2014 23:32 Заявить о нарушении