Endless love

A great love is not an illness,
It's not an illness,- a desire
To run away from delusion and meanness,
To bring in life and nurse love-fire.

A great love is not a delirium.
Thou at first love brings obsessive thoughts and actions,
You feel inside of you a bacterium,
That can't resist love as well as antibiotics' reactions.

A great  love is not a mystery,
Bright blinking eyes and catchy smile-
Every love has a history,
How two together march in file.

A great  love is a happiness,
A wish and will forever be the whole,
To hold  and fill the emptiness 
That tortured heart and soul.

A great love  is a melody-
You feel, you sing, you think of,
And every step you take with lullaby
That tells a tale about endless love.


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понравидось. но может быть размер строф можно подкорректировать.

Ольга Спирина 2   06.09.2014 21:38     Заявить о нарушении
спасибо, приму во внимание)

Анна Хонькина   07.09.2014 11:53   Заявить о нарушении