The line of your smile brings me back to the past
I kissed it I drank it with passion...
And now who is touching these lips' pure lust?...
...obsession...
The sparks in your eyes that evoke all the bliss,
I played with the sun in your hair...
But now who has signed your neck with a kiss?
...despair....
The touch of your fingers - electrical shock,
I wished I could melt in this fusion...
But now who is sharing your tender sweet talks?...
...delusion...
(21.05.2014)
obsession? despair? delusion?
© Copyright: Алёнушка Ильхамовна, 2014
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I like the structure of this poem. It is interesting and these three words..I can't explain it but they fit just perfect.
And the theme, the rhyme...I like it all.
Настя Кингсли 06.08.2014 13:04 • Заявить о нарушении
And the theme, the rhyme...I like it all.
Настя Кингсли 06.08.2014 13:04 • Заявить о нарушении
thanks a lot, it means a lot to me, and I am very happy to know you liked my verse :)
Best,
Алёнушка
Алёнушка Ильхамовна 06.08.2014 22:14 Заявить о нарушении
Best,
Алёнушка
Алёнушка Ильхамовна 06.08.2014 22:14 Заявить о нарушении