Put me to bed by faith

На русском http://www.stihi.ru/2013/09/24/9816

Put me to bed
With faith.
Give me the name
of death.
Then, please, sell me
Your soul
For incoming in me
And draining me
Into shoal;
For my veins stained up
With mud;
For the words in the night
"You are slut" ;
For abuse in respond
To my kiss;
For my craving after
Your twigs.

Put me to bed
With death.
Give me the name
of faith.
Then save your soul
For my sake.
Word of honour is "No"
We break.


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Actually, not bad)) Do you have anything more in English?

Олли Картмен   21.05.2014 23:59     Заявить о нарушении
Oh, I`m so glad, you can appreciate it! Very few people comment English poems.
Yes, I have
http://www.stihi.ru/2013/08/02/10377
http://www.stihi.ru/2013/07/23/932
http://www.stihi.ru/2013/12/01/11340

and so on, I invite you to the section "Переводы", there you`ll observe translations of my and not only my poems.

Мария Баулина   22.05.2014 14:37   Заявить о нарушении
Splendid! Замечательно пишете))

Олли Картмен   22.05.2014 23:37   Заявить о нарушении