I can survive without you,
Of course, I will survive.
There are a lot of things to do
Without you in life.
You aren't the only human being -
I'll find somebody else.
I won't be able - do you think?
These aren't just empty tales.
You think I won't stand any day
Without seeing your eyes.
You think I will forever stay
With you and not revise...
I will forget our mutual walks,
My feelings, and sun gleams,
And our amazing talks
All time, and all the dreams.
You've made my life so rich, so new.
Thank you for all you've brought.
I will survive without you,
Of course... Or maybe not...
I will survive
© Copyright: Алена Лемстрем, 2014
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To my mind a douting person is on the right way.
Nobody knows where should we stop.
I like your poem. It is expressive, full of hot fillings and its topic is close to everybody's heart. It is a real pleasure to read it.
With love
Анна Саянова 06.04.2014 18:30 • Заявить о нарушении
Nobody knows where should we stop.
I like your poem. It is expressive, full of hot fillings and its topic is close to everybody's heart. It is a real pleasure to read it.
With love
Анна Саянова 06.04.2014 18:30 • Заявить о нарушении
Thank you for your kind words! Here is only one of my first steps in English poetry and I'm a doubting person as well. That is why it's really important to me to figure out how it sounds and I'm so glad you like it. Thanks again!
Sincerely yours,
Алена Лемстрем 07.04.2014 07:36 Заявить о нарушении
Sincerely yours,
Алена Лемстрем 07.04.2014 07:36 Заявить о нарушении