Today

Арина Элхэ Бедрина
I was born in the previous century,
In a country which doesn't exist.
I have always been such an adventurer:
There are no sins that I can resist.

And today, facing grayish reality,
I admit that I've always been wrong:
There is no such a possibility
To be built without being destroyed.

12.12.13


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I don't really understand why it was titled "today"... but i have an idea, may be wrong but strange. "Today" can be the main hero of this poem... it was born in the past and can't go to future without selfdestruction. "Today" exists only at the edge of time and lives
in permanant transformation.
I'm sorry if my idea is totally incorrect...

Крылатая   14.12.2013 10:58   •   Заявить о нарушении
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Oh no, your idea is exactly what I was trying to express! Though you actually did it better than I in the poem :)

Арина Элхэ Бедрина   14.12.2013 14:59   Заявить о нарушении
:) i understand your idea, that means means you did it good

Крылатая   14.12.2013 23:54   Заявить о нарушении
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